Friday, February 4, 2011

Page 4 and a Song!

I have finally made it to page 4! I know, I know, but it's beginning to be a slow process. I really need to make more time to write, or I am never going to get finished!

But on a lighter note, I did manage to pen a song that I hope will be included in the film. All I need now is to get a piano so I can write the "music" portion to go along with the "lyrics" ..... The song itself is called --

"Bad Man" .....

Here are the lyrics:

VERSE 1

Check out the guy in the black suit
You better clear out, he's a bad dude
There is a scar under his right eye
He'll ruin your life, and make you cry

PRE-CHORUS

He don't care, what your name is
Take you out, and end up blameless

CHORUS

He' a--
Heartbreaker, skirtchaser, liar cheater troublemaker
Watch out for the tricks he'll play
Don't believe the words he'll say

POST CHORUS

Keep your distance right there where you stand
Hope they better catch him if they can
'Cause he's a bad man

Bad man, a bad bad man x2

(Piano Instrumental part here)

VERSE 2

Take a good look at his sly grin
The criminal's bait, to draw you in
You'll want to think you're his only girl
He'll light the match, and burn your world

REPEAT PRE-CHORUS, CHORUS, AND POST CHORUS

Bad man, a bad bad man x2 (this is separate from the one in the Post Chorus, giving a total of x4)

TAG (SLOW)

Watch out for the tricks he'll play
Don't believe the words he'll say

They better catch that dangerous man
He'll get you any way that he can
I hope that you can understand

LAST LINE
That he's a bad man


That's it! Good? Bad? I think it's okay ....

But anyway, I'm off to write some more. Talk later .....

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